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发表于 2004-3-26 22:41:10
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Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:54.30,0:08:55.20,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\fad(050,050)}没关系、没关系啦
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:55.20,0:08:56.30,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\fad(050,050)}一点都不好
我觉得这样翻译,这两句话好像前言不对后语...
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Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:18.90,0:07:20.20,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\fad(050,050)}看, 就是他
标点
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Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:51.20,0:09:55.10,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\fad(050,050)}对不起了转校生,不得不打你
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:55.20,0:09:57.00,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\fad(050,050)}不打你难消我心头之恨
我喜欢的译法:对不起了转校生,我非揍你不可,否则难消我心头之恨
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Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:35.20,0:13:36.50,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\fad(050,050)}为此还被人揍
“为此”过于书面化,作为心理活动不适合
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Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:18.40,0:14:21.00,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\fad(050,050)}反正都是要死,那我宁愿先看过一次在死
错别字
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Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:42.80,0:15:45.15,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\fad(050,050)}{\alpha30\fs30}把目标放入中心,按…
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:43.40,0:15:45.15,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\fad(050,050)}{\fs30}{\fnBitsumishi}A.T.FIELD{\fs35}{\fn方正粗宋简体} 展开
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:45.40,0:15:47.00,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\fad(050,050)}{\alpha30\fs30}把目标放入中心,按…
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:45.40,0:15:47.50,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\fad(050,050)}照作战计划进行,没问题吧?真嗣
这里的字幕感觉偏高,可否降低一点?
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Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:00.30,0:18:01.80,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\fad(050,050)}没有获得许可的平民
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:01.80,0:18:04.00,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\fad(050,050)}你以为可以让他们进入 {\fs 28}{\fnBitsumishi}ENTRY PLUG{\fn方正粗宋简体} ?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:04.70,0:18:05.90,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\fad(000,050)}我准许了
第一句的“许可”和第二句的“准许”日文应是同一个词,而且这里是对应关系,翻译的时候也用同一种译法比较好
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:15.30,0:18:17.50,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\fad(050,050)}趁现在排出驾驶舱,快!
上面那句用了ENTRY PLUG,这里又用“驾驶舱”?
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Dialogue: 1,0:18:56.40,0:18:57.25,Default,,0000,0000,0002,,{\fad(000,050)}{\pos(360,470)}转校生!
感叹号用全角
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另外,我还是不喜欢宋体…… |
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