ＥＰＯＳＩＤＥ ０１ 修改稿

Shirley

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Shirley

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:01:30.00,0:01:32.50,Signs,,0000,0000,0260,,时间 公元2015年
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:01:54.80,0:01:56.20,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,今日 12点30分
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:01:56.20,0:01:59.80,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,对以东海地域为中心之关东中部全部地区
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:01:59.80,0:02:03.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,宣布进入特殊紧急状态
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:03.60,0:02:07.40,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,各位居民请立刻到指定的避难所避难
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:07.80,0:02:09.20,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,再重复一次
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:10.00,0:02:12.40,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,今日 12点30分
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:12.40,0:02:16.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,对以东海地域为中心之关东中部全部地区
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:16.00,0:02:18.80,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,宣布进入特殊紧急状态
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:18.80,0:02:22.40,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,各位居民请立刻到指定的避难所避难
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:20.50,0:02:24.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,怎么偏偏在这时候找不到人
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:24.00,0:02:25.80,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,伤脑筋//真是败给他了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:26.20,0:02:28.70,Signs,,0000,0540,0540,,碇 真嗣
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:27.00,0:02:33.40,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,由于发布进入特殊紧急状态，现在所有线路均无法通话

美里照片上的话：特效“给真嗣：我会去接你，稍等一下哟！看这里！”

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:33.80,0:02:35.40,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,不行吗
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:36.40,0:02:39.00,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,果然还是不应该来的
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:43.00,0:02:45.00,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,看来是碰不上她了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:46.20,0:02:47.70,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,没办法…
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:47.70,0:02:49.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,先去避难所吧
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:03:14.80,0:03:18.80,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,不明移动物体正朝基地方向前进中
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:03:18.80,0:03:20.80,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,确认目标影像
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:03:20.80,0:03:22.30,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,现在切换到主屏幕上   
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:03:24.00,0:03:26.00,Kouzou,,0000,0000,0000,,事隔15年了吧
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:03:26.00,0:03:27.80,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,嗯 没错
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:03:29.00,0:03:30.00,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,是使徒
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:03:30.60,0:03:33.20,Signs,,0300,0000,0060,,第一话
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:03:30.60,0:03:33.20,Signs,,0400,0000,0100,,使徒来袭
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:03:42.00,0:03:43.80,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,导弹全部命中目标
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:04:03.00,0:04:05.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,抱歉 让你久等了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:04:21.80,0:04:26.40,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,目标物依然存在，目前继续朝第三新东京市前进中
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:04:26.60,0:04:28.90,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,空军的战斗力没有办法阻止它!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:04:29.80,0:04:33.00,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,进行总攻！把厚木和入间所有的兵力都给我派出去！
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:04:33.00,0:04:34.60,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,别在乎损失了!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:04:34.60,0:04:36.60,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,无论如何都要将目标击毁！
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:04:49.80,0:04:52.20,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,为什么? 应该是直接命中了啊
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:04:52.60,0:04:54.20,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,坦克部队全灭
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:04:54.80,0:04:57.80,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,诱导武器和炮弹的攻击也几乎完全无效吗…
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:04:57.80,0:05:00.80,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,不行 这种程度的火力根本就不管用
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:05:01.20,0:05:03.20,Kouzou,,0000,0000,0000,,果然还是A.T.Field吗
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:05:03.20,0:05:06.80,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,嗯 普通武器对付使徒是没用的
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:05:10.40,0:05:13.60,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,知道了 就照预定计划进行
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:05:18.40,0:05:19.80,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,等等 不会吧…
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:05:19.80,0:05:21.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,…他们打算用N2地雷吗？！
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:05:22.20,0:05:23.40,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,趴下！
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:05:46.20,0:05:47.40,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,成功了！！
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:05:48.60,0:05:51.60,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,很可惜，好像轮不到你们出场了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:05:51.80,0:05:53.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,冲击波来了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:05:54.90,0:05:56.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,没事吧?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:05:56.20,0:05:59.90,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,嗯,不过嘴里好像全是沙子
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:05:59.90,0:06:02.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,那还好啦
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:02.60,0:06:04.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,那么要开始啰…
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:04.60,0:06:06.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,1…2 !
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:14.40,0:06:16.50,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,谢啦 得救了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:16.90,0:06:19.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,哪里 我才是呢 葛城小姐
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:20.00,0:06:22.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,叫“美里”就可以了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:22.20,0:06:25.80,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,再次请你多多指教了 碇真嗣
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:26.00,0:06:26.80,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,是
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:27.00,0:06:28.50,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,目标怎么样了?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:28.50,0:06:31.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,由于电波受阻 无法确认
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:31.60,0:06:34.20,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,那种大爆炸…一定被摧毁了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:34.60,0:06:36.40,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,探测器恢复了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:37.20,0:06:39.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,爆炸中心有能量反应
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:39.00,0:06:40.40,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,什么？！
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:40.40,0:06:42.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,影像恢复了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:46.00,0:06:48.40,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,我们的王牌…
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:49.60,0:06:50.80,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,怎么会这样
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:51.20,0:06:52.20,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,该死的怪物
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:03.80,0:07:07.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,不用担心 他是最优先保护的对象***他已经受到最高保护了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:07.60,0:07:09.30,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,那么帮我准备一下运输车吧
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:09.60,0:07:10.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,直达的那一种
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:11.40,0:07:15.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,对 毕竟是我自己说要去接他
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:15.20,0:07:17.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,我会好好负起责任的啦，先这样了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:20.40,0:07:23.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}不过也真是倒楣{\i0}
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:23.00,0:07:25.40,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}车子才刚修好而已{\i0}
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:25.40,0:07:27.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}现在就已经烂得一蹋糊涂{\i0}
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:27.00,0:07:30.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}贷款还有33期…还要外加修理费啊…{\i0}
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:30.20,0:07:33.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}而且我最好的衣服也完蛋了{\i0}
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:32.80,0:07:35.40,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,那个…美里小姐…
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:33.60,0:07:36.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}枉费我特地穿这件衣服来{\i0}
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:37.20,0:07:38.80,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,那个…美里小姐
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:38.80,0:07:40.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,什么事？
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:40.40,0:07:43.30,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,这么做真的没有问题吗？
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:43.70,0:07:45.50,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,没关系没关系
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:45.50,0:07:49.80,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,现在是非常时期 为了发动车子这也是没办法嘛
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:49.80,0:07:53.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,还有…不要看我这样 我好歹也是国际公务员喔
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:53.20,0:07:55.40,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,万事OK啦
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:56.20,0:07:58.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,你的话很缺乏说服力耶
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:59.00,0:08:00.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,真没意思
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:00.60,0:08:03.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,长着一张可爱的脸…没想到那么老成
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:04.00,0:08:05.20,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,是这样吗
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:05.60,0:08:07.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,怎么 生气啦
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:08.00,0:08:11.40,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,抱歉抱歉 毕竟是个男孩子啊
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:11.80,0:08:14.20,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,美里小姐才是，都这么大年纪了还跟小孩子一样呢
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:20.60,0:08:23.40,Kouzou,,0000,0000,0000,,和预料中的一样 它正在进行自我修复
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:23.80,0:08:27.40,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,不是那样的话 单独武器早就发挥作用了**要非如此 這自走兵器就沒

利用價值了**作为单独兵器他就毫无用处了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:30.00,0:08:32.60,Kouzou,,0000,0000,0000,,真是了不起
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:32.60,0:08:34.80,Kouzou,,0000,0000,0000,,还能提升机能啊
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:35.40,0:08:38.00,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,而且好像还有智慧的样子
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:38.40,0:08:41.20,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,再度进攻也只是时间问题吧
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:42.60,0:08:45.90,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,闸门即将关闭 请小心
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:45.90,0:08:48.30,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,现在准备开车了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:46.00,0:08:48.10,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,特务机关NERV?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:48.10,0:08:51.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,对 联合国直属的非公开组织
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:48.30,0:08:56.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,这是路线B-22特别列车 直达G-33**** <-- 需要確認
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:51.60,0:08:53.20,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,我爸爸就在这里吗
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:53.20,0:08:56.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,对啊 你知道父亲在做什么工作吗
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:58.00,0:09:00.50,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,途中全部不停车
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:00.50,0:09:01.80,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,请注意
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:00.60,0:09:01.90,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,负责保护人类…
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:01.90,0:09:04.80,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,的重要工作 从老师那边听来的
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:07.40,0:09:10.60,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,现在起本作战的指挥权就移交给你了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:10.60,0:09:12.60,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,让我们看看你的能力吧
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:12.60,0:09:13.60,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,了解
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:14.00,0:09:16.80,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,碇君 我承认我们拥有的武器…
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:16.80,0:09:20.20,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,对目标毫无效果
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:21.00,0:09:23.80,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,但换了你的话就能赢了吧
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:24.20,0:09:26.00,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,NERV就是为此而成立的
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:26.60,0:09:28.40,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,我们拭目以待
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:29.80,0:09:31.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,目标仍然没有变化
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:32.00,0:09:35.20,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,现在迎击系统的运作率是7.5%
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:37.00,0:09:39.00,Kouzou,,0000,0000,0000,,联合国军也举双手投降了吗
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:39.00,0:09:40.40,Kouzou,,0000,0000,0000,,你打算怎么做
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:41.40,0:09:43.00,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,让初号机启动
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:43.40,0:09:46.80,Kouzou,,0000,0000,0000,,让初号机吗？没有驾驶驶员喔
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:47.40,0:09:50.80,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,没问题 另一个预备人员就快送到了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:51.80,0:09:54.40,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,现在要去爸爸那里吗
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:55.00,0:09:57.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,是啊 是会那样
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:01.20,0:10:02.10,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,爸爸…
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:04.00,0:10:07.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,对了 你有没有带父亲给你的ID卡
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:09.20,0:10:10.20,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,有
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:11.60,0:10:12.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,请看
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:13.00,0:10:14.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,谢谢
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:15.90,0:10:17.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,那这个你拿去看一下吧
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:18.80,0:10:19.80,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,NERV?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:20.80,0:10:22.40,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,爸爸的工作…
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:22.80,0:10:24.80,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,是要我做什么吗
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:26.80,0:10:28.20,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,说的也是
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:28.20,0:10:32.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,没事的话 爸爸怎么会写信给我
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:33.00,0:10:36.40,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,原来如此 不擅长面对你父亲吧
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:37.40,0:10:39.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,跟我一样呢
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:45.00,0:10:46.40,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,好棒喔！
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:47.40,0:10:49.00,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,真的是GEO FRONT啊*
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:49.40,0:10:54.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,对 这就是我们的秘密基地:\NNERV本部
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:54.00,0:10:56.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,重建世界的根据地…
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:56.00,0:10:58.40,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,…人类最后的堡垒喔
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:05.40,0:11:07.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,好奇怪啊
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:07.60,0:11:10.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,明明应该是这条路的啊
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:10.40,0:11:13.80,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,往中核区的封闭通路, 现状…
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:11.80,0:11:15.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,就是因为这样这里才不适合穿裙子啊
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:13.90,0:11:17.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,B-26区请照顺序开放
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:15.40,0:11:18.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,不过律子到底在哪里啊
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:18.80,0:11:21.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,不好意思喔 我还不习惯这里
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:21.20,0:11:22.80,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,这里刚才已经走过了喔
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:25.00,0:11:29.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,不过不要紧啦 系统就是要让人用才有的嘛
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:29.40,0:11:34.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,技术部一课E计划负责人赤木律子博士 赤木律子博士
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:34.60,0:11:39.40,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,请速与作战部一课的葛城美里一尉联络
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:35.40,0:11:37.20,Signs,,0760,0000,0400,,O
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:35.40,0:11:37.20,Signs,,0800,0000,0420,,2
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:39.60,0:11:42.40,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,真败给他了 又迷路了啊
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:46.80,0:11:48.80,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,哎呀 律子…
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:54.00,0:11:56.40,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,你在做什么？葛城一尉
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:56.40,0:11:58.80,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,现在不但人手不足 连时间也没有了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:59.40,0:12:00.40,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,抱歉
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:03.40,0:12:05.00,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,他就是“那个”男孩把？
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:05.40,0:12:09.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,对 根据马尔杜克报告书选出的Third Children*第三适格者
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:10.00,0:12:11.60,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,请多指教
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:12.00,0:12:12.80,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,是
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:13.20,0:12:15.80,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,这点跟他爸超像的
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:15.80,0:12:18.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,这种一点也不可爱的地方
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:18.20,0:12:20.00,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,那么接下来就拜托了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:24.20,0:12:26.20,Kouzou,,0000,0000,0000,,隔了3年的重逢啊
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:27.40,0:12:28.40,Makoto,,0000,0000,0000,,副司令
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:28.80,0:12:30.80,Makoto,,0000,0000,0000,,目标再度开始移动了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:31.20,0:12:34.20,Kouzou,,0000,0000,0000,,好 全体人员进入第一战斗位置
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:34.60,0:12:37.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,再重复一次 全体人员进入第一战斗位置
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:37.60,0:12:39.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,准备对地迎击战
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:39.60,0:12:40.80,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,听听**说要这样呢
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:40.80,0:12:42.40,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,真是事态严重呢**这可是一件大事呢
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:43.20,0:12:45.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,对了 初号机怎样了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:45.40,0:12:47.60,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,保持B型装备 现正冷却中
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:48.00,0:12:49.40,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,那玩意真的能动吗
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:49.40,0:12:51.40,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,不是一次都没有动过吗
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:51.80,0:12:57.20,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,启动机率是0.000000001%
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:57.20,0:12:59.80,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,叫它09系统还真是有道理
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:00.00,0:13:02.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,那不就是说它根本动不了吗
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:02.40,0:13:04.80,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,太失礼了吧 又还不到0
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:05.20,0:13:07.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,以数字上来说是这样啦
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:07.00,0:13:11.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,总之 不管怎么说 只说“启动不了”是不能了事的
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:20.00,0:13:23.00,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,那…那个…变得一片漆黑了耶
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:26.40,0:13:29.40,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,脸？巨大的机器人？
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:31.00,0:13:32.80,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,不用找了 更本没收录进去
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:33.80,0:13:37.80,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,这是由人类所制造的终极泛用人型决战兵器…
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:37.80,0:13:40.20,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,人造人EVANGELION
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:40.20,0:13:42.00,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,这个初号机
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:42.00,0:13:44.40,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,是在极秘密的情况下制造的
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:44.40,0:13:47.20,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,我们人类最后的王牌喔
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:47.20,0:13:49.00,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,这也是爸爸的工作吗
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:49.00,0:13:50.40,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,没错
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:51.80,0:13:53.20,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,好久不见了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:54.60,0:13:55.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,爸爸…
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:58.40,0:13:59.60,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,出击
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:00.00,0:14:03.40,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,出击? 零号机不是还在冻结中吗
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:05.20,0:14:07.80,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,难道…你想用初号机吗
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:08.20,0:14:09.40,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,没有其他选择了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:09.80,0:14:12.80,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,不会吧…丽还不能行动吧
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:13.60,0:14:15.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,没有驾驶员啊
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:16.00,0:14:17.40,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,刚才已经送到了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:18.20,0:14:19.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,你是认真的吗
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:20.40,0:14:21.40,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,碇真嗣
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:21.80,0:14:22.30,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,是
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:22.60,0:14:24.00,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,是你要坐上去喔
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:25.00,0:14:29.50,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,但是就算是绫波丽要和EVA同步都花了7个月
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:29.50,0:14:32.40,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,对这样刚来的他而言 根本就不可能
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:32.40,0:14:35.00,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,只要坐上去就可以了 我并不期待他能有什么其他表现
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:35.10,0:14:35.80,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,可是…
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:36.20,0:14:38.60,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,击退使徒是我们现在的首要任务**
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:39.60,0:14:44.20,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,为此我们除了让稍微有机会能与EVA同步的人坐上去以外
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:44.20,0:14:45.60,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,别无他法
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:46.50,0:14:48.50,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,这点你也应该明白的 葛城一尉
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:50.90,0:14:52.30,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,也是…
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:54.00,0:14:56.20,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,爸爸 为什么叫我来
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:56.60,0:14:58.40,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,就和你想的一样
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:58.80,0:15:02.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,那你是要我坐上这个 跟刚才那个东西战斗吗
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:03.00,0:15:04.00,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,没错
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:04.40,0:15:06.00,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,我才不要做那种事呢
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:06.00,0:15:07.80,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,为什么现在才要我来
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:07.80,0:15:10.20,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,爸爸不是不需要我吗
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:10.60,0:15:12.80,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,就是因为需要才叫你来
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:15.40,0:15:16.80,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,为什么要我
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:17.20,0:15:19.60,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,因为其他人办不到
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:20.20,0:15:21.70,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,不可能的…那样的事…**
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:22.40,0:15:24.40,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,看也没看过,听也没听过
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:24.80,0:15:25.90,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,怎么可能办得到
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:27.00,0:15:28.20,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,去听说明
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:29.20,0:15:32.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,什么啊…办不到的**我怎么办得到嘛
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:33.70,0:15:35.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,我怎么可能会驾驶这种东西
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:37.00,0:15:38.20,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,要坐就快上去
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:39.00,0:15:40.60,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,不然就给我滚回去
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:51.80,0:15:54.00,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,, 被那家伙发现这里了吗

第1 至第8 装甲板被破坏

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:58.00,0:16:00.00,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,真嗣 已经没有时间了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:04.90,0:16:06.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,坐上去吧
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:07.30,0:16:08.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,不要…
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:08.60,0:16:10.20,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,我特地跑来…
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:10.20,0:16:12.20,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,不应该是这样的
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:13.20,0:16:16.80,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,真嗣 你是为了什么而来到这里的
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:18.20,0:16:20.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,不可以一味地逃避…你的父亲
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:20.00,0:16:23.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,更重要的是不可以逃避你自己
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:23.40,0:16:24.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,我知道…
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:24.60,0:16:27.40,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,但是…我根本不行的啊
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:35.60,0:16:36.40,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,冬月
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:37.60,0:16:38.80,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,去把丽叫醒吧
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:39.20,0:16:40.20,Kouzou,,0000,0000,0000,,她能操纵吗
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:40.60,0:16:42.40,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,又不是死了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:43.40,0:16:44.40,Kouzou,,0000,0000,0000,,我知道了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:46.20,0:16:47.00,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,丽
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:47.00,0:16:48.10,Rei,,0000,0000,0000,,是
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:48.10,0:16:50.80,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,预备人员不能用了 再试一次吧
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:51.00,0:16:52.00,Rei,,0000,0000,0000,,是
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:54.60,0:16:57.40,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,将初号机的系统重新配置为丽的
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:57.40,0:16:58.00,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,再启动
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:58.00,0:17:01.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,了解 原作业中断 进行再启动
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:17:02.80,0:17:06.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,果然我仍是可有可无的人
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:17:40.60,0:17:41.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,危险
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:17:51.20,0:17:52.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,EVA动了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:17:52.60,0:17:54.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,这是怎么回事
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:17:54.00,0:17:56.20,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,右手的拘束器被他扯开了?!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:17:56.20,0:17:58.00,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,不会吧!不可能的！！
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:17:58.40,0:18:00.40,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,连ENTRY PLUG都还没插入
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:00.40,0:18:01.70,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,不可能会动的啊
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:03.00,0:18:05.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,连接口设备都没有居然会有反应**（INTERFACE）
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:06.00,0:18:09.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,难道是想要保护他?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:10.20,0:18:11.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,行了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:32.00,0:18:33.20,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}不能逃{\i0}
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:33.70,0:18:34.50,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}不能逃{\i0}
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:34.70,0:18:35.50,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}不能逃!{\i0}
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:35.70,0:18:36.50,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}不能逃!!{\i0}
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:37.00,0:18:38.00,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}不能逃!!!{\i0}
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:39.80,0:18:40.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,我做
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:41.20,0:18:42.20,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,我来驾驶
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:45.80,0:18:47.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,冷却完毕
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:47.00,0:18:48.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,右腕重新固定完成
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:48.60,0:18:50.40,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,机架内所有对接器就位**
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:50.80,0:18:51.60,Maya,,0000,0000,0000,,了解
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:51.60,0:18:54.60,Maya,,0000,0000,0000,,信号停止PLUG已经排出**
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:55.00,0:18:58.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,了解 插入ENTRY PLUG**

开放联动注水系统，准备进行接触

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:04.80,0:19:06.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,PLUG固定完成**
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:06.40,0:19:08.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,开始第一次接触
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:13.00,0:19:15.00,Maya,,0000,0000,0000,,ENTRY PLUG注水
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:16.00,0:19:17.80,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,啊?这是什么?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:21.20,0:19:22.20,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,没关系
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:22.20,0:19:26.80,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,让肺内充满LCL的话,\N血液就能直接取得所需的氧气
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:27.20,0:19:28.60,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,很快就会习惯的
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:31.40,0:19:33.20,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,真恶心
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:33.20,0:19:35.40,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,忍耐一下! 你可是男孩子啊！
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:37.00,0:19:38.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,主电源接通…
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:38.00,0:19:40.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,动力传达至所有回路 没有问题
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:40.60,0:19:41.40,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,了解
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:41.40,0:19:43.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,进行第二次接触
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:45.00,0:19:49.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,A10 神经连接无异常

LCL转化率正常**

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:49.20,0:19:52.40,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,思考形态设置成以日语为基础
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:53.20,0:19:55.60,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,初期接触完全没问题
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:55.60,0:19:57.60,Maya,,0000,0000,0000,,双向回路开通
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:58.00,0:20:00.60,Maya,,0000,0000,0000,,同步率 41.3%
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:01.20,0:20:02.00,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,好厉害
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:02.40,0:20:04.60,Maya,,0000,0000,0000,,谐波均为正常值
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:04.60,0:20:06.20,Maya,,0000,0000,0000,,没有失控现象
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:06.80,0:20:07.80,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,可以了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:09.00,0:20:10.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,准备出击!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:12.40,0:20:13.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,准备出击!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:13.60,0:20:15.20,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,第一锁定栓解除
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:17.00,0:20:18.20,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,确认解除
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:18.20,0:20:20.20,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,集线总控桥开始移动**(Umbilical Bridge)
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:22.60,0:20:24.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,第二锁定栓解除
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:26.20,0:20:28.20,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,第一拘束器解除
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:28.20,0:20:30.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,同样的,第二拘束器解除
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:34.20,0:20:37.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,从1号到15号的安全装置解除
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:37.00,0:20:38.20,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,确认解除
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:38.20,0:20:40.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,现在初号机的状况是“Free”
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:40.60,0:20:44.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,内部电源充电完毕 外部电源插头一切正常
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:45.00,0:20:46.00,Maya,,0000,0000,0000,,了解
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:46.00,0:20:47.70,Maya,,0000,0000,0000,,EVA初号机移至射出口
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:21:03.20,0:21:05.20,Maya,,0000,0000,0000,,路线畅通，ALL GREEN
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:21:05.40,0:21:07.00,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,出击准备完成！
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:21:08.00,0:21:08.80,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,了解
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:21:10.00,0:21:11.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,没问题吧…?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:21:11.00,0:21:12.00,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,当然
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:21:12.80,0:21:16.00,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,不打倒使徒的话我们就没有未来了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:21:17.00,0:21:20.00,Kouzou,,0000,0000,0000,,碇, 这样真的可以吗?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:21:21.80,0:21:23.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,出击!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:21:56.50,0:21:59.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,真嗣, 别死啊!

Shirley

**君 〈——看情况

AleCli

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:03:30.60,0:03:33.20,Signs,,0300,0000,0060,,第一话
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:03:30.60,0:03:33.20,Signs,,0400,0000,0100,,使徒来袭

按照普通字幕显示在画面下部妥当

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:56.20,0:07:58.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,你的话很缺乏说服力耶
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:20.00,0:13:23.00,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,那…那个…变得一片漆黑了耶

去掉"耶"或改用其他语气词

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:13.20,0:12:15.80,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,这点跟他爸超像的

觉得太口语化，用在字幕不恰当。另外，外人是否应该称呼“父亲”？前后文里都是用“父亲”的。

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:32.00,0:18:33.20,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}不能逃{\i0}
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:33.70,0:18:34.50,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}不能逃{\i0}
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:34.70,0:18:35.50,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}不能逃!{\i0}
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:35.70,0:18:36.50,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}不能逃!!{\i0}
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:37.00,0:18:38.00,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}不能逃!!!{\i0}

合成一句较好；或者消去时间间隔，效果为惊叹号增加……

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:03.40,0:12:05.00,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,他就是“那个”男孩把？  把 错字

tram

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:04:54.80,0:04:57.80,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,诱导武器和炮弹的攻击也几乎完全无效吗…////导弹和大炮完全无效
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:43.40,0:07:46.30,Note,,0000,0000,0000,,车后面的电池没给钱//这里加一句解释我觉得挺重要的，这个地方画面短，一时反应不过来就溜过去了。
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:00.60,0:08:03.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,长着一张可爱的脸…没想到那么老成//"老成"这里用个贬义词感觉好点，和可爱相对
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:11.80,0:08:14.20,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,美里小姐才是，都这么大年纪了还跟小孩子一样呢//呢字觉得不符合真嗣的性格。
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:32.60,0:08:34.80,Kouzou,,0000,0000,0000,,还能提升机能啊//还能自我增强
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:47.40,0:10:49.00,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,真的是GEO FRONT啊*//这个Geo Front还是翻译出来好点，它本身后面出现得不多，不像AT.Field这类
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:21.20,0:11:22.80,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,这里刚才已经走过了喔//喔好像也不符合真嗣的语气。
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:29.40,0:11:34.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,技术部一课E计划负责人赤木律子博士 赤木律子博士//课建议改为科
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:34.60,0:11:39.40,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,请速与作战部一课的葛城美里一尉联络//课建议改为科,一尉应该就是我们说的上尉吧?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:39.60,0:11:42.40,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,真败给他了 又迷路了啊//他应为"她"
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:54.00,0:11:56.40,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,你在做什么？葛城一尉//一尉
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:13.20,0:12:15.80,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,这点跟他爸超像的//超像的觉得不太顺口，有点台湾味?我也说不上来
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:20.00,0:13:23.00,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,那…那个…变得一片漆黑了耶//耶
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:31.00,0:13:32.80,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,不用找了 更本没收录进去//更本应为根本
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:46.50,0:14:48.50,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,这点你也应该明白的 葛城一尉//一尉
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:04.40,0:15:06.00,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,我才不要做那种事呢//这种事我不要
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:20.00,0:16:23.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,更重要的是不可以逃避你自己//这里原文很短，能不能换个短些的说法?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:17:02.80,0:17:06.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,果然我仍是可有可无的人//仍改为"还"要顺口些
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:21:56.50,0:21:59.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,真嗣, 别死啊!//真嗣  活着回来

tram

最初由 Shirley 发表
[B]**君 〈——看情况 [/B]

感觉日本人比较注重这些敬称的，可能第一次见面还是要的。其他地方，随便的时候就省了吧，毕竟也要符合咱们的习惯。

ANGELS_ZC

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:23.80,0:08:27.40,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,不是那样的话 单独武器早就发挥作用了**要非如此 這自走兵器就沒利用價值了**作为单独兵器他就毫无用处了

这句总觉得不大通顺，它在自我修复和“单独武器早就发挥作用了”“這自走兵器就沒利用價值”“作为单独兵器他就毫无用处了”似乎扯不上关系。

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:37.00,0:15:38.20,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,要坐就快上去
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:39.00,0:15:40.60,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,不然就给我滚回去

我认为这里用要么……要么……会比较通顺，
要么就快点坐上去，要么就给我滚回去

tram

最初由 ANGELS_ZC 发表
[B]这句总觉得不大通顺，它在自我修复和“单独武器早就发挥作用了”“這自走兵器就沒利用價值”“作为单独兵器他就毫无用处了”似乎扯不上关系。



我认为这里用要么……要么……会比较通顺，
要么就快点坐上去，要么就给我滚回去 [/B]

要么...要么好像不够cool啊，呵呵。
那句单独兵器的，的确不顺。
Fuyutsuki: It's regenerating itself, as expected.

Gendo:  If it didn't, it would be useless as an independent weapon.
它在自我修复，和预期的一样。
如果不能自我修复，作为独立的武器就没用处了。

sakiel

由于今天没什么时间，所以先粗略看一下。
标点符号的问题就先不管，“君”哪里用哪里不用也先不考虑

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:01:54.80,0:01:56.20,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,今日 12点30分//空格去掉
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:10.00,0:02:12.40,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,今日 12点30分//同上

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:01:56.20,0:01:59.80,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,对以东海地域为中心之关东中部全部地区//为什么用地域呢，用地区不行吗？

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:11.60,0:02:13.40,Signs,,0000,0000,0000,,全线运行终止//这句还是要的吧，用特效

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:27.00,0:02:33.40,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,由于发布进入特殊紧急状态，现在所有线路均无法通话//发布-->宣布

照片上的话位置错了，这是时间轴的问题

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:33.80,0:02:35.40,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,不行吗//直接写“打不通？”

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:46.20,0:02:47.70,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,没办法…
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:47.70,0:02:49.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,先去避难所吧//这两句应该是连在一起说的，合在一行写“没办法，先去避难所吧”

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:03:18.80,0:03:20.80,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,确认目标影像//还是原来的译法“以影像确认目标”好一点，意思是用镜头捕捉目标（而不是通过其他探测器）//而且，这句跟下一句放在同一行比较好

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:03:42.00,0:03:43.80,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,导弹全部命中目标//原文“全弹”并不只包括导弹，还是写“弹药全部命中目标”或“全部火力命中目标”

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:04:26.60,0:04:28.90,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,空军的战斗力没有办法阻止它!//我不是很确定，这里的“航空队”是否指日本航空自卫队，如果是的话，译成“空军”欠妥

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:04:54.80,0:04:57.80,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,诱导武器和炮弹的攻击也几乎完全无效吗…//诱导武器-->制导武器

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:04.60,0:06:06.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,1…2 !//美里好像还说了一句“用力”

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:20.00,0:06:22.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,叫“美里”就可以了//不需要引号吧，写“叫我美里就行了”

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:28.50,0:06:31.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,由于电波受阻 无法确认//电波干扰

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:31.60,0:06:34.20,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,那种大爆炸…一定被摧毁了//那样的大爆炸

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:03.80,0:07:07.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,不用担心 他是最优先保护的对象***他已经受到最高保护了//分成两句“嗯，请不用担心”“他已经受到最高保护了”

sakiel

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:44.40,0:13:47.20,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,我们人类最后的王牌喔//“喔”去掉

最初由 tram 发表
[B]要么...要么好像不够cool啊，呵呵。
那句单独兵器的，的确不顺。
Fuyutsuki: It's regenerating itself, as expected.

Gendo:  If it didn't, it would be useless as an independent weapon.
它在自我修复，和预期的一样。
如果不能自我修复，作为独立的武器就没用处了。[/B]

同意，“要么”的说法感觉没有原来的好

下面两句这样说：
和预想的一样，它在进行自我修复
如果不能自我修复，作为独立的武器就没用处了

最初由 tram 发表
[B]Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:29.40,0:11:34.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,技术部一课E计划负责人赤木律子博士 赤木律子博士//课建议改为科
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:34.60,0:11:39.40,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,请速与作战部一课的葛城美里一尉联络//课建议改为科,一尉应该就是我们说的上尉吧?
[/B]

“课”这种说法可以保留，反正什么“公安9课”“特车2课”之类的都用得很多了

“一尉”不明，好像日文里说“上尉”是说“大尉”的...

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:29.40,0:11:34.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,技术部一课E计划负责人赤木律子博士 赤木律子博士//这里第二个“赤木律子博士”换下一行显示