ＥＰＯＳＩＤＥ ０１讨论

Shirley

初翻及初修正：

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:01:30.00,0:01:32.50,Signs,,0000,0000,0260,,時間 西元2015年
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:01:54.80,0:01:58.20,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,今日 12點30分 東海中心地區之
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:01:58.20,0:02:03.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,關東中部全部區域...發佈進入特殊緊急狀況//状态
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:03.60,0:02:07.40,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,各位居民請立刻到指定地下防空設施避難
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:07.80,0:02:09.20,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,再重複一次...
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:10.00,0:02:13.40,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,今日 12點30分 東海中心地區之
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:11.60,0:02:13.40,Signs,,0000,0000,0000,,全線運行終止
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:13.40,0:02:18.80,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,關東中部全部區域...發佈進入特殊緊急狀況
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:18.80,0:02:22.40,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,各位居民請立刻到指定地下防空設施避難
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:20.50,0:02:24.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,怎麼偏偏在這時候找不到人!!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:24.00,0:02:25.80,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,真是令人頭痛?!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:26.20,0:02:28.70,Signs,,0000,0540,0540,,碇 真嗣
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:27.00,0:02:33.40,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,由於發佈特殊緊急狀況 現在所有線路無法通話
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:33.80,0:02:35.40,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,"恩..不能通阿"?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:36.40,0:02:39.00,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,果然還是不應該來的
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:43.00,0:02:45.00,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,沒辦法等她了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:46.20,0:02:47.70,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,沒辦法..
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:47.70,0:02:49.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,還是先去避難所吧!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:03:14.80,0:03:18.80,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,原形不明的移動物體依然朝著指揮中心移動//（移動/移動废话）不明物体
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:03:18.80,0:03:20.80,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,目標影像確認
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:03:20.80,0:03:22.30,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,現在切換到主螢幕上!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:03:24.00,0:03:26.00,Kouzou,,0000,0000,0000,,事隔15年了吧...
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:03:26.00,0:03:27.80,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,嗯 沒錯!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:03:29.00,0:03:30.00,Kouzou,,0000,0000,0000,,是 使徒
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:03:30.60,0:03:33.20,Signs,,0300,0000,0060,,第一話:
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:03:30.60,0:03:33.20,Signs,,0400,0000,0100,,使徒來襲!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:03:42.00,0:03:43.80,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,全彈命中目標!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:04:03.00,0:04:05.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,抱歉 讓你久等了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:04:21.80,0:04:26.40,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,目標依然健在. 目前朝著第3東京市前進中
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:04:26.60,0:04:28.90,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,空航隊的戰鬥力已經無法阻止牠了!//空军
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:04:29.80,0:04:33.00,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,全面作戰!!將所有的兵力全派出去!!!////Atsugi and Iruma 基地的所有兵力
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:04:33.00,0:04:34.60,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,什麼都不要管了!!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:04:34.60,0:04:36.60,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,不管怎樣都要將目標擊毀!!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:04:49.80,0:04:52.20,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,為什麼?應該是直接命中了阿!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:04:52.60,0:04:54.20,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,戰車部隊全毀!////坦克营（Battalion 营（陆军单位））
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:04:54.80,0:04:57.80,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,導彈和炸彈式攻擊完全無效?!////导弹和大炮
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:04:57.80,0:05:00.80,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,不行!這種程度的火力\N根本就不管用
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:05:01.20,0:05:03.20,Kouzou,,0000,0000,0000,,果然還是AT力場嗎?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:05:03.20,0:05:06.80,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,嗯. 對使徒來說\N普通的武器一點用都沒有
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:05:10.40,0:05:13.60,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,我明白了.就照預定的計畫發動!//（行动）
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:05:18.40,0:05:19.80,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,等一下, 他們該不會是...
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:05:19.80,0:05:21.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,...要使用N2地雷吧?!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:05:22.20,0:05:23.40,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,趴下!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:05:46.20,0:05:47.40,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,成功了!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:05:48.60,0:05:51.60,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,真是遺憾. 好像輪不到你們出場了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:05:51.80,0:05:53.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,衝擊波來了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:05:54.90,0:05:56.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,你沒事吧?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:05:56.20,0:05:59.90,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,嗯,不過嘴裡好像吃到了沙子
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:05:59.90,0:06:02.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,那就好...
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:02.60,0:06:04.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,那麼要搬囉...
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:04.60,0:06:06.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,1...2 !
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:14.40,0:06:16.50,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,謝啦 , 得救了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:16.90,0:06:19.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,哪裡 , 我才是呢 葛城さん//小姐
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:20.00,0:06:22.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,叫"美里" 就可以了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:22.20,0:06:25.80,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,再次謝謝你, 請多多指教, 碇 真嗣-君
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:26.00,0:06:26.80,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,是
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:27.00,0:06:28.50,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,後來目標怎麼樣了?//去掉后来
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:28.50,0:06:31.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,由於電波阻擾, 無法確認
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:31.60,0:06:34.20,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,那種大爆炸... 一定被摧毀了!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:34.60,0:06:36.40,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,探測器恢復了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:37.20,0:06:39.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,爆炸地有能量反應!//爆心（Explosion center）
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:39.00,0:06:40.40,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,什麼... ?!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:40.40,0:06:42.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,影像恢復了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:46.00,0:06:48.40,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,我們最後的王牌.....
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:49.60,0:06:50.80,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,怎麼會這樣...
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:51.20,0:06:52.20,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,該死的怪物!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:02.80,0:07:03.80,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,嗯
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:03.80,0:07:07.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,不用擔心.我知道他要以最優先順序受到保護
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:07.60,0:07:10.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,所以幫我準備一下運輸車.要可以直達的那一種 ...///CAR TRAIN, 装运汽车的列车；“要”去掉
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:11.40,0:07:15.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,對..是我自己說要去接他 ..
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:15.20,0:07:17.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,我會好好負起責任的.
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:20.40,0:07:23.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}不過也真是倒楣!{\i0}
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:23.00,0:07:25.40,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}車子好不容易才剛修好而已{\i0}//好不容易去掉
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:25.40,0:07:27.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}...現在就已爛的一蹋糊塗{\i0}//已经
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:27.00,0:07:30.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}貸款還有33次... 外加修理費..{\i0}//贷款偿还
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:30.20,0:07:33.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}還有最好的衣服也完蛋了!...{\i0}
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:32.80,0:07:35.40,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,那個... 美里さん...
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:33.60,0:07:36.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}害我特地穿這件衣服來! 股嗚嗚...{\i0}
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:37.20,0:07:38.80,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,那個... 美里さん?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:38.80,0:07:40.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,嗯 , 什麼事?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:40.40,0:07:43.30,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,這樣好嗎 , 做這種事?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:43.70,0:07:45.50,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,阿~~! 沒關係..沒關係.
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:45.50,0:07:49.80,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,現在是緊急狀況麻, 而且車子要是不能動 不就什麼都談不上了嗎?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:49.80,0:07:53.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,還有..不要看我這樣.我可是國際公務員喔
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:53.20,0:07:55.40,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,萬事OK啦~
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:56.20,0:07:58.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,很缺乏說服力喔!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:07:59.00,0:08:00.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,真是無趣
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:00.60,0:08:03.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,一副可愛的臉... 沒想到卻老成得讓人出乎預料///沒想到=出乎預料...-->>沒想到那么老成
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:04.00,0:08:05.20,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,是這樣嗎?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:05.60,0:08:07.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,啊 , 生氣啦?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:08.00,0:08:11.40,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,抱歉抱歉... 畢竟你也是個男孩子呢
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:11.80,0:08:14.20,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,美里さん才是, 一大把年紀還這麼孩子氣
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:20.60,0:08:23.40,Kouzou,,0000,0000,0000,,和預料中的一樣, 牠正在進行自我修復
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:23.80,0:08:27.40,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,如果不是這樣的話. 一般武器早就發揮作用了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:30.00,0:08:32.60,Kouzou,,0000,0000,0000,,喔. 真是了不起
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:32.60,0:08:34.80,Kouzou,,0000,0000,0000,,連增強機能也辦得到阿
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:35.40,0:08:38.00,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,甚至好像連智慧都有了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:38.40,0:08:41.20,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,再度進攻也只是是時間的問題吧
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:42.60,0:08:45.90,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,[門要關了, 請注意 ]
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:45.90,0:08:48.30,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,[現在要開車了]
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:46.00,0:08:48.10,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,特務機關NERV?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:48.10,0:08:51.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,對,國聯直屬的非公開組織
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:48.30,0:08:56.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,[這是路線B-22特別列車 直達G-33]
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:51.60,0:08:53.20,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,家父就在這裡嗎?//爸爸……
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:53.20,0:08:56.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,對阿. 你知道你父親在做什麼嗎?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:58.00,0:09:00.50,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,[途中全部不停車]
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:00.50,0:09:01.80,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,[請注意!]
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:00.60,0:09:01.90,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,保護人類...
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:01.90,0:09:04.80,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,的重要工作, 從老師那邊聽來的
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:07.40,0:09:10.60,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,從現在開始本作戰的指揮權就交給你了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:10.60,0:09:12.60,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,就讓我們看看你的能力吧
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:12.60,0:09:13.60,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,了解
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:14.00,0:09:16.80,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,碇君, 我承認我們的武器...
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:16.80,0:09:20.20,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,對目標毫無任何有效手段//直译病句，对目标毫无任何效果
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:21.00,0:09:23.80,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,但要是你出馬的話就能贏了吧?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:24.20,0:09:26.00,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,NERV就是為此而成立的的
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:26.60,0:09:28.40,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,我會拭目以待的
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:29.80,0:09:31.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,目標仍然沒有變化
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:32.00,0:09:35.20,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,現在迎擊系統的運作率是7.5%
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:37.00,0:09:39.00,Kouzou,,0000,0000,0000,,聯合國軍也舉手投降了嗎？
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:39.00,0:09:40.40,Kouzou,,0000,0000,0000,,你打算怎麼做?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:41.40,0:09:43.00,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,把初號機啟動///启动初号机
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:43.40,0:09:46.80,Kouzou,,0000,0000,0000,,初號機嗎? 沒有駕駛員喔
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:47.40,0:09:50.80,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,沒問題. 還有一個預備人員馬上就到
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:51.80,0:09:54.40,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,現在要去家父那裡嗎?//爸爸
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:09:55.00,0:09:57.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,是啊 , 是會那樣.
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:01.20,0:10:02.10,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,爸爸....
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:04.00,0:10:07.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,啊對了, 你有沒有帶你父親給你的ＩＤ身分證?//ID就可以了，重复
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:09.20,0:10:10.20,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,阿 , 有
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:11.60,0:10:12.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,請看
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:13.00,0:10:14.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,謝謝
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:15.90,0:10:17.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,那 , 這個你讀一讀吧
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:18.80,0:10:19.80,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,NERV?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:20.80,0:10:22.40,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,爸爸的工作
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:22.80,0:10:24.80,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,是要我做什麼嗎?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:26.80,0:10:28.20,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,說的也是
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:28.20,0:10:32.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,沒有要事的話,家父怎麼會寫信給我
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:33.00,0:10:36.40,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,原來如此.不擅長面對你父親吧
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:37.40,0:10:39.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,跟我一樣呢
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:45.00,0:10:46.40,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,喔好厲害!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:47.40,0:10:49.00,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,真的是地底城市耶!//用注释形式(GEO-FRONT)
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:49.40,0:10:54.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,對, 這就是我們的秘密基地:\NNERV本部
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:54.00,0:10:56.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,他是重建世界重要的據點...//去掉“他是”
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:10:56.00,0:10:58.40,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,...人類之堡壘喔
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:05.40,0:11:07.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,好奇怪喔...
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:07.60,0:11:10.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,的確應該是這條路的啊
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:10.40,0:11:13.80,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,[往中核區的封閉通路, 現狀.....]
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:11.80,0:11:15.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,就是因為這樣所以穿裙子才不方便
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:13.90,0:11:17.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,[B-26區請照順序開放]
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:15.40,0:11:18.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,不過律子到底跑到哪裡去了?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:18.80,0:11:21.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,對不起喔, 我還不習慣這裡
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:21.20,0:11:22.80,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,剛才已經走過這裡了喔
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:25.00,0:11:29.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,不過不要緊啦. 系統就是要讓人利用的嘛
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:29.40,0:11:34.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,技術一課, 主管E計劃的赤木律子博士- 赤木律子博士:
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:34.60,0:11:39.40,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,請立刻和作戰一課的葛城 美里軍官連絡
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:35.40,0:11:37.20,Signs,,0760,0000,0400,,O
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:35.40,0:11:37.20,Signs,,0800,0000,0420,,2
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:39.60,0:11:42.40,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,真是敗給她了, 又迷路了啊...
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:46.80,0:11:48.80,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,啊啦! 律子...
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:54.00,0:11:56.40,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,妳在做什麼 , 葛城一尉?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:56.40,0:11:58.80,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,現在不但人手不足, 連時間也沒有耶
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:11:59.40,0:12:00.40,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,嘻. 對不起
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:03.40,0:12:05.00,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,就是這個男孩嗎?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:05.40,0:12:09.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,對, 根據Marduk報告書選出的 "Third Children"
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:10.00,0:12:11.60,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,請多指教了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:12.00,0:12:12.80,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,嗯? 是
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:13.20,0:12:15.80,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,跟他老爸一模一樣
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:15.80,0:12:18.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,這種一點也不可愛的地方
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:18.20,0:12:20.00,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,那接下來就拜託你了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:24.20,0:12:26.20,Kouzou,,0000,0000,0000,,隔了3年的重逢啊
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:27.40,0:12:28.40,Makoto,,0000,0000,0000,,副司令!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:28.80,0:12:30.80,Makoto,,0000,0000,0000,,目標又再度開始移動了///再度去掉
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:31.20,0:12:34.20,Kouzou,,0000,0000,0000,,好...全體人員進入第一戰鬥位置
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:34.60,0:12:37.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,再重複一次: 全體人員進入第一戰鬥位置
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:37.60,0:12:39.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,準備對地迎擊戰
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:39.60,0:12:40.80,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,就是這樣
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:40.80,0:12:42.40,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,這可是一件大事呢
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:43.20,0:12:45.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,對了初號機怎樣了?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:45.40,0:12:47.60,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,保持B型裝備. 現正冷卻中
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:48.00,0:12:49.40,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,那真的能動嗎?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:49.40,0:12:51.40,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,不是一次都沒有動過嗎
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:51.80,0:12:57.20,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,啟動機率是 0.000000001%
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:57.20,0:12:59.60,Note,,0000,0000,0000,,09=9個0
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:12:57.20,0:12:59.80,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,叫牠09系統還真是有道理~!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:00.00,0:13:02.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,那不就是說它根本動不了嗎?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:02.40,0:13:04.80,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,啊.太失禮了吧.啟動率又不是"0"
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:05.20,0:13:07.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,以數字上來說是這樣
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:07.00,0:13:11.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,總之, 不管怎麼說, 只說"啟動不了"是不能了事的
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:20.00,0:13:23.00,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,啊... 那個....變得一片漆黑了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:26.40,0:13:29.40,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,啊....臉?... 巨大的機器人?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:31.00,0:13:32.80,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,不用找了. 上面沒記載
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:33.80,0:13:37.80,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,這是由人類所製造的終極泛用人型決戰用兵器...//作战用
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:37.80,0:13:40.20,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,人造人 "Evangelion"
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:40.20,0:13:42.00,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,這個初號機
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:42.00,0:13:44.40,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,是在極秘密的情況下製造而成的
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:44.40,0:13:47.20,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,我們人類最後的王牌喔
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:47.20,0:13:49.00,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,這也是家父的工作嗎?//父亲
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:49.00,0:13:50.40,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,沒錯
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:51.80,0:13:53.20,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,好久不見了呢
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:54.60,0:13:55.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,爸爸...
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:13:58.40,0:13:59.60,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,呵...出擊
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:00.00,0:14:03.40,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,出擊?! 零號機不是還在凍結中嗎?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:05.20,0:14:07.80,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,難道說....你想用初號機嗎?!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:08.20,0:14:09.40,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,已經別無他路可走了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:09.80,0:14:12.80,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,等一下... 零還不能動吧?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:13.60,0:14:15.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,沒有駕駛員耶
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:16.00,0:14:17.40,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,剛才已經到了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:18.20,0:14:19.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,認真的嗎?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:20.40,0:14:21.40,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,碇 真嗣君
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:21.80,0:14:22.30,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,是
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:22.60,0:14:24.00,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,你要坐上去喔
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:25.00,0:14:29.50,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,可是連綾波零要和EVA同步都花了7個月///綾波零？丽？
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:29.50,0:14:32.40,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,對剛剛來的他而言.根本就不可能
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:32.40,0:14:35.00,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,只要坐在上面就可以了. 我並不期待他能有什麼好表現
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:35.10,0:14:35.80,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,可是...
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:36.20,0:14:38.60,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,現在擊退使徒是最優先事項喔///现在以击退使徒为最优先
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:39.60,0:14:44.20,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,所以,唯一的辦法就是盡量讓能跟EVA同步的人坐上去
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:44.20,0:14:45.60,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,除此之外沒有別的辦法
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:46.50,0:14:48.50,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,這點你也應該明白的, 葛城一尉
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:50.90,0:14:52.30,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,說的也是...//也是
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:54.00,0:14:56.20,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,爸爸, 為什麼叫我來?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:56.60,0:14:58.40,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,就和你想的一樣
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:14:58.80,0:15:02.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,那你是要我坐上這的東西, 然後跟剛才那個東西戰鬥嗎?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:03.00,0:15:04.00,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,對
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:04.40,0:15:06.00,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,這種事我不要!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:06.00,0:15:07.80,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,為什麼現在才要我來?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:07.80,0:15:10.20,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,爸爸, 你不是不需要我嗎!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:10.60,0:15:12.80,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,就是因為需要才叫你來
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:15.40,0:15:16.80,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,為什麼要我?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:17.20,0:15:19.60,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,因為其他人沒辦法
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:20.20,0:15:21.70,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,那是什麼意思
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:22.40,0:15:24.40,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,看也沒看過,聽也沒聽過
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:24.80,0:15:25.90,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,怎麼可能辦得到!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:27.00,0:15:28.20,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,去聽說明吧
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:29.20,0:15:32.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,什麼嘛...做不到的!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:33.70,0:15:35.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,我沒有理由會駕駛這個東西!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:37.00,0:15:38.20,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,要上去的話, 就快一點
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:39.00,0:15:40.60,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,不然你就給我回去!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:51.80,0:15:54.00,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,那傢伙已經發現這裡了嗎?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:58.00,0:16:00.00,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,真嗣-君,已經沒有時間了喔///象声词不要……
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:04.90,0:16:06.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,坐上去吧!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:07.30,0:16:08.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,不要...
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:08.60,0:16:10.20,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,我特地跑來...
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:10.20,0:16:12.20,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,應該不是這樣的!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:13.20,0:16:16.80,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,真嗣-君, 你是為了什麼而來到這裡的?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:18.20,0:16:20.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,逃避是不行的.不可以逃避你父親
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:20.00,0:16:23.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,更重要的是你不可以逃避你自己
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:23.40,0:16:24.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,我知道....
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:24.60,0:16:27.40,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,但是...我不可能辦到啊!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:35.60,0:16:36.40,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,冬月
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:37.60,0:16:38.80,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,叫醒零
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:39.20,0:16:40.20,Kouzou,,0000,0000,0000,,她能操縱嗎?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:40.60,0:16:42.40,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,又不是死了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:43.40,0:16:44.40,Kouzou,,0000,0000,0000,,我知道了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:46.20,0:16:47.00,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,零
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:47.00,0:16:48.10,Rei,,0000,0000,0000,,是
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:48.10,0:16:50.80,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,預備的人不能用了, 再來一次吧
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:51.00,0:16:52.00,Rei,,0000,0000,0000,,是
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:54.60,0:16:58.00,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,將初號機的駕駛系統改寫為零的駕駛系統, 再啟動!////将初號機的系統重新配置为REI的……
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:58.00,0:17:01.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,遵命. 原作業中斷, 進行再啟動
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:17:02.80,0:17:06.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,果然我還是不被需要的人
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:17:40.60,0:17:41.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,危險!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:17:51.20,0:17:52.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,EVA動了?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:17:52.60,0:17:54.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,這是怎麼回事!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:17:54.00,0:17:56.20,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,右手的固定器被他扯開了?!//拘束器
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:17:56.20,0:17:58.00,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,不會吧!不可能的!!!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:17:58.40,0:18:00.40,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,連駕駛艙都還沒插入!///插入拴（ENTRY PLUG）<--采用中文加注释
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:00.40,0:18:01.70,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,不可能會動的啊
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:03.00,0:18:05.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,連連接裝置都沒有居然會有反應////INTERFACE:机器人用“接口设备”最正确
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:06.00,0:18:09.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,應該是說牠保護了他?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:10.20,0:18:11.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,做得到!~!!///他能行
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:32.00,0:18:33.20,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}不能逃避{\i0}
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:33.70,0:18:34.50,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}不可以逃避.{\i0}
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:34.70,0:18:35.50,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}不可以逃避!{\i0}
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:35.70,0:18:36.50,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}不可以逃避!!.{\i0}
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:37.00,0:18:38.00,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}不可以逃避!!!{\i0}
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:39.80,0:18:40.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,我做//让我来吧
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:41.20,0:18:42.20,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,我來駕駛
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:45.80,0:18:47.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,冷卻終了//冷却完毕
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:47.00,0:18:48.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,右腕已從新固定完畢//重新固定完成
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:48.60,0:18:50.40,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,裝置一切就位////机架内所有平台就位
Position setting for docking in the cage is okay. 机架内所有平台就位
cage，这里指机架；docking,这里指装载支架/平台

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:50.80,0:18:51.60,Maya,,0000,0000,0000,,了解
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:51.60,0:18:54.60,Maya,,0000,0000,0000,,停止信號艙已排出完畢//信号停止器已经排出
stop signal plug 信号停止器

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:55.00,0:18:58.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,了解.駕駛艙插入//建议使用“插入ENTRY PLUG”

漏掉：
开放联动注水系统，准备接续？？？

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:04.80,0:19:06.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,駕駛艙固定終了//完毕
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:06.40,0:19:08.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,開始第一次接觸
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:13.00,0:19:15.00,Maya,,0000,0000,0000,,將水注入駕駛艙//ENTRY PLUG
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:16.00,0:19:17.80,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,嗯?這是什麼?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:21.20,0:19:22.20,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,沒關係
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:22.20,0:19:26.80,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,讓肺內充滿"LCL"的話,\N就能直接把氧氣輸入到血液中
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:27.20,0:19:28.60,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,很快就會習慣的
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:31.40,0:19:33.20,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,真難受
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:33.20,0:19:35.40,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,忍耐一下! 你是男孩子吧?!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:37.00,0:19:38.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,主電源連接...
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:38.00,0:19:40.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,動力傳達至所有迴路.沒問題//没有问题
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:40.60,0:19:41.40,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,了解
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:41.40,0:19:43.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,進行第二次接觸
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:45.00,0:19:49.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,A10 神經連接無異常.
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:49.20,0:19:52.40,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,思考型態改為日語
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:53.20,0:19:55.60,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,初期接觸完全沒問題
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:55.60,0:19:57.60,Maya,,0000,0000,0000,,雙向回路開通
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:58.00,0:20:00.60,Maya,,0000,0000,0000,,同步率 41.3%
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:01.20,0:20:02.00,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,好厲害
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:02.40,0:20:04.60,Maya,,0000,0000,0000,,調和率都在正常值
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:04.60,0:20:06.20,Maya,,0000,0000,0000,,並沒有爆走 [失控]
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:06.80,0:20:07.80,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,可以出動了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:09.00,0:20:10.60,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,準備出動!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:12.40,0:20:13.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,準備出動!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:13.60,0:20:15.20,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,第一鎖定器解除
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:17.00,0:20:18.20,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,確認解除
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:18.20,0:20:20.20,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,手臂固定橋開始移動//控制桥
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:22.60,0:20:24.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,第二鎖定器解除
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:26.20,0:20:28.20,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,第一固定器解除
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:28.20,0:20:30.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,同樣的,第二固定器解除
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:34.20,0:20:37.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,從1號到15號的安全裝置解除
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:37.00,0:20:38.20,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,確認解除
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:38.20,0:20:40.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,現在初號機的狀況是"Free"
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:40.60,0:20:44.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,內部電源充電完畢.外部電源插頭無異狀//一切正常
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:45.00,0:20:46.00,Maya,,0000,0000,0000,,了解
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:46.00,0:20:47.70,Maya,,0000,0000,0000,,EVA初號機移到射出口..//发射台
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:21:03.20,0:21:05.20,Maya,,0000,0000,0000,,前進路線沒有障礙物"All Green"//线路
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:21:05.40,0:21:07.00,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,發射準備完成
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:21:08.00,0:21:08.80,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,了解
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:21:10.00,0:21:11.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,沒關係吧...?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:21:11.00,0:21:12.00,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,當然
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:21:12.80,0:21:16.00,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,不打倒使徒的話我們就沒有未來了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:21:17.00,0:21:20.00,Kouzou,,0000,0000,0000,,碇, 這樣真的可以嗎?
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:21:21.80,0:21:23.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,出動!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:21:56.50,0:21:59.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}真嗣-君, 你可別死啊!{\i0}
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:21:59.00,0:22:00.00,Signs,,0000,0000,0000,,.
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:22:01.00,0:22:08.50,SongD,,0000,0000,0000,,Fly me to the moon, and let me play among the stars
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:22:09.10,0:22:16.60,SongD,,0000,0000,0000,,Let me see what Spring is like on Jupiter and Mars
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:22:17.20,0:22:24.70,SongD,,0000,0000,0000,,In other words: hold my hand!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:22:25.30,0:22:32.80,SongD,,0000,0000,0000,,In other words: darling kiss me
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:22:33.40,0:22:40.90,SongD,,0000,0000,0000,,Fill my heart with song and let me sing forevermore
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:22:41.50,0:22:49.00,SongD,,0000,0000,0000,,You are all I long for all I worship adore
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:22:49.60,0:22:57.10,SongD,,0000,0000,0000,,In other words: please be true!
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:22:57.70,0:23:05.20,SongD,,0000,0000,0000,,In other words: I love you

Shirley

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:04:29.80,0:04:33.00,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,全面作戰!!將Atsugi and Iruma 基地的所有兵力派出去!

━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:04:52.60,0:04:54.20,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,坦克营全灭!

（Battalion 营（陆军单位））
━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:37.20,0:06:39.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,爆心有能量反應!

爆心（Explosion center）
━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:03.00,0:18:05.20,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,連接口设备都沒有居然會有反應

INTERFACE:机器人用“接口设备”最正确
━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:48.60,0:18:50.40,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,机架内所有平台就位

（Position setting for docking in the cage is okay.） 机架内所有平台就位
cage，这里指机架；docking,这里指装载支架/平台
━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:51.60,0:18:54.60,Maya,,0000,0000,0000,,信号停止器已经排出

stop signal plug 信号停止器/拴/插頭
━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:18.20,0:20:20.20,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,控制桥開始移動

umbilical
脐带[ 向潜水器提供推进动力和控制信号，并将潜器上各种信息传送到支持船监]

这里是具有“提供推进动力和控制信号”的功能
所以正确为“控制桥”

第三六翼天使

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:40.60,0:20:44.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,內部電源充電完畢.外部電源插頭無異狀//一切正常//无异常
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:47.00,0:18:48.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,右腕已從新固定完畢//重新固定完成//完毕
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:06:37.20,0:06:39.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,爆炸地有能量反應!//爆心（Explosion center）//爆炸中心地区
还さん可以改成小姐
先就这些了

AleCli

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:04:21.80,0:04:26.40,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,目標依然健在. 目前朝著第3東京市前進中   觉得用“健在”有点怪，改成“存在”？

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:16:48.10,0:16:50.80,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,預備的人不能用了, 再來一次吧    没有记错的话，以前vcd字幕是用“新兵/人”这个词。感觉还是这个比较贴切，毕竟vcd版印象深刻

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:17:54.00,0:17:56.20,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,右手的固定器被他扯開了?!   他--〉它

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:04.60,0:20:06.20,Maya,,0000,0000,0000,,並沒有爆走 [失控]   爆--〉暴

人名方面也赞成用“丽”而不是“零”，也是vcd的后遗症……

还有一切“出动”也建议改为“出击”，还是vcd……

ED里：forevermore 此处应是forever more；worship adore 应为worship and adore

lcn

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:21:56.50,0:21:59.00,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}真嗣-君, 你可別死啊!{\i0}

你可千万不要出事啊，比较妥当……

sakiel

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:04:29.80,0:04:33.00,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,全面作戰!!將所有的兵力全派出去!!!////Atsugi and Iruma 基地的所有兵力

Atsugi and Iruma：厚木和入间（日本航空自卫队的基地所在地）
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Dialogue: Marked=0,0:05:10.40,0:05:13.60,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,我明白了.就照預定的計畫發動!//（行动）

还是用“发动”比较好，意指发动N2地雷。
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Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:51.80,0:15:54.00,Gendou,,0000,0000,0000,,那傢伙已經發現這裡了嗎?

后面有一句“第一至第八装甲板被破坏”
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Dialogue: Marked=0,0:15:58.00,0:16:00.00,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,真嗣-君,已經沒有時間了喔//真嗣，没有时间了
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Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:47.00,0:18:48.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,右腕已從新固定完畢//重新固定完成

原文作“Arm再固定完了”，可译作“手臂重新固定完成”
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Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:48.60,0:18:50.40,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,裝置一切就位////机架内所有平台就位

（Position setting for docking in the cage is okay.） 机架内所有平台就位
cage，这里指机架；docking,这里指装载支架/平台

我觉得docking在这里只是代表类似“停靠”的意思而已
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Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:51.60,0:18:54.60,Maya,,0000,0000,0000,,停止信號艙已排出完畢//信号停止器已经排出

原文作“停止信號plug”，可否译为“信号停止插头”？
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漏掉：
开放联动注水系统，准备接续？？？

接续？接触？(对应下面第一、二次接触)
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Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:33.20,0:19:35.40,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,忍耐一下! 你是男孩子吧?!//你是男孩子啊
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Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:45.00,0:19:49.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,A10 神經連接無異常.
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:19:49.20,0:19:52.40,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,思考型態改為日語

这两句之间好像还有一句？
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Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:46.00,0:20:47.70,Maya,,0000,0000,0000,,EVA初號機移到射出口..//EVA初号机就发射口
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Dialogue: Marked=0,0:21:03.20,0:21:05.20,Maya,,0000,0000,0000,,前進路線沒有障礙物"All Green"//线路

这里还是“路线”比较好，“线路”的话，给人“电子线路”的感觉
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Dialogue: Marked=0,0:21:05.40,0:21:07.00,Ritsuko,,0000,0000,0000,,發射準備完成//出动准备完成
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Dialogue: Marked=0,0:22:41.50,0:22:49.00,SongD,,0000,0000,0000,,You are all I long for all I worship adore//worship and adore
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另外，标点符号用全角字符
尽量避免使用“?!”这种不太规范的标点

先看这么多，明天继续 ^_^
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同意AleCli的意见，“出动”改为“出击”感觉好一点

lcn

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:24.00,0:02:25.80,Misato,,0000,0000,0000,,真是令人頭痛?!

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:43.00,0:02:45.00,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,沒辦法等她了
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:46.20,0:02:47.70,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,沒辦法..
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:02:47.70,0:02:49.60,Shinji,,0000,0000,0000,,還是先去避難所吧!

令人頭痛?!为什么标点符号是“？！”
后面镜头是美里照片时，要不要加一句“注意这里”

ANGELS_ZC

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:08:32.60,0:08:34.80,Kouzou,,0000,0000,0000,,連增強機能也辦得到阿

用“自我增值机能”应该会比较好，这句语法上似乎也有错误，要么是“连自我增值机能也有了”或者“连自我增值也办得到”。

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:18:51.60,0:18:54.60,Maya,,0000,0000,0000,,停止信號艙已排出完畢//信号停止器已经排出

这个不止我一个提出了，看来还是用“信号停止插头比较恰当。

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:13.60,0:20:15.20,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,第一鎖定器解除

锁定器这个词好像没听说过，用拘束锁或者拘束扣可能比较好

Shirley

Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:13.60,0:20:15.20,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,第一鎖定栓
解除
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:17.00,0:20:18.20,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,確認解除
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:18.20,0:20:20.20,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,XX橋開始移動
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:22.60,0:20:24.00,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,第二鎖定栓
解除
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:26.20,0:20:28.20,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,第一拘束器解除
Dialogue: Marked=0,0:20:28.20,0:20:30.60,Speaker,,0000,0000,0000,,同樣的,第二拘束器解除

这里是LOCK BOLT，讲了英文
按照标准翻： 鎖定栓
另外一个是拘束器

Shirley

如图

仔细考虑了一下，那时候的画面显示的应该是机身各个位置与机架的接续装置：

这样翻译：
机架内所有对接装置就位